Post by Maplepaw on Jan 11, 2007 20:39:21 GMT -5
Hi everyone. I decided to start to write a story. It is based off Warriors, but does not have any of the characters that are in any of the books. Let me know if you like the starting and I will continue to write it, but if it is bad give criticism or just tell me it is not so good.
Sky jumped up on the fence post and stared blankly into the forest. He did this daily always pondering about something. Everyday his friend, Swish, always asked him what he was staring at, but Sky never replied.
Today Sky had not jumped up onto the fence post. Swish was waiting for him there for his daily routine. Swish thought and said to himself, That lazy cat is probably still sleeping or getting spoiled by the twolegs.
Sky was actually dreaming. The tom was dreaming about the forest. Sky always felt like there was something familiar about the forest. In his dream the scent of the forest smelled familiar. Sky was walking through the forest until he came face-to-face with a golden tabby. Sky got one look at him and then he finally woke up.
Sky stretched and yawned until he got up and headed out into the fresh air. Once outside Sky saw Swish on the fence post he was always on. "Hey Swish what are you doing?"
Swish looked down at Sky and jumped onto the grassy ground. "Just looking at the forest like you usually do." Sky quickly replied, "You know...Something is just familiar out there in the forest. It is like a use to live there. I do not know what it is though." Sky paused before he started again, "I think I am going to have a look."
Sky jumped up on the post and observed the forest. "No Sky. You would never survive. There are wild cats that would massacre you out there. Please, please, please do not go."
Sky stared at the forest and back down to Swish. Sky had no clue what to do.
Just a start give me your thought, good? bad?
IN THE DISTANCE
by Matt Bruner
Sky jumped up on the fence post and stared blankly into the forest. He did this daily always pondering about something. Everyday his friend, Swish, always asked him what he was staring at, but Sky never replied.
Today Sky had not jumped up onto the fence post. Swish was waiting for him there for his daily routine. Swish thought and said to himself, That lazy cat is probably still sleeping or getting spoiled by the twolegs.
Sky was actually dreaming. The tom was dreaming about the forest. Sky always felt like there was something familiar about the forest. In his dream the scent of the forest smelled familiar. Sky was walking through the forest until he came face-to-face with a golden tabby. Sky got one look at him and then he finally woke up.
Sky stretched and yawned until he got up and headed out into the fresh air. Once outside Sky saw Swish on the fence post he was always on. "Hey Swish what are you doing?"
Swish looked down at Sky and jumped onto the grassy ground. "Just looking at the forest like you usually do." Sky quickly replied, "You know...Something is just familiar out there in the forest. It is like a use to live there. I do not know what it is though." Sky paused before he started again, "I think I am going to have a look."
Sky jumped up on the post and observed the forest. "No Sky. You would never survive. There are wild cats that would massacre you out there. Please, please, please do not go."
Sky stared at the forest and back down to Swish. Sky had no clue what to do.
Just a start give me your thought, good? bad?