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Post by sunneith on May 9, 2006 20:16:12 GMT -5
Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble!” Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
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Post by Umbrapaw on May 23, 2006 17:14:22 GMT -5
Wow that is sad.
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Post by Pookystar on Apr 15, 2007 18:21:22 GMT -5
And sorta creepy...but I've heard that one before. It went around in an email a while ago.
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Post by Lagoonpool on Jul 27, 2007 20:22:08 GMT -5
That was so and and you know why cause it happened to one of my famil members that were so close and so dear to me. It was my uncle. I was very close to him. I was at his house he ran to the store to get us a bag of chips. He told me he'd be back in 5 minutes or so. So I watched t.v. hours past and he still wasnt home. Hours later a policewoman came to my door,"youre uncle if dead," she said. This is a true story. It happened 2 years ago..........
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Post by icetail on Jul 28, 2007 14:33:08 GMT -5
omg i am so sorry! the same sort of thing happened to my friend. her dad went out to the pub when she was only five and he choked on a chip and then a few hours later a policeman came to the door and she answered it and they told her straight and didnt even let her mom tell her
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Rainstorm
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Post by Rainstorm on Jul 28, 2007 20:08:43 GMT -5
Thats so sad, same happened to my sisters boyfriend, Its posted as a story somewhere...
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Post by Deathfang on Jul 29, 2007 16:24:20 GMT -5
That story was sent around as a chainlink email think. I remember getting it.
(Rainpaw, yous should change where it says mate of deathpaw. I'm known as DeathReaper now!^^)
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Rainstorm
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Post by Rainstorm on Jul 29, 2007 17:17:06 GMT -5
Most chanlink emails annoy me beczuse they always say stuff like "Your mother will die in 3 hours if you don't send this to ten people in the next 10 minutes."
Ok, I'll change that then, congratulations.
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Post by Deathfang on Jul 29, 2007 17:48:34 GMT -5
I hate chainlink emails too><
(thanks Rain, once you reach like 150 or 175 I think you can become a warrior as well rain^^ just ask one of the staff to be sure of the exact number of posts)
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Rainstorm
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Post by Rainstorm on Jul 29, 2007 18:00:21 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure its 225 or around there
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Deathfang
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Post by Deathfang on Jul 30, 2007 20:47:20 GMT -5
(over 200 then? ohh okay. you're like half way there though!^^)
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Post by sweetmint on Jul 31, 2007 16:30:11 GMT -5
(it is 226 to be exact) that is mega sad!
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Post by Starpaw on Aug 1, 2007 14:23:45 GMT -5
That is sad....
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Post by Leafdance on Aug 9, 2007 0:52:59 GMT -5
What a sad story, I'm all tearing up, just be happy you've had such luck, as not to be one in the car that night, when she tried so hard, with all her might, to keep herself alive, but why oh why did she have to die? {{it's kind of a poem I just realized. how neat}} That is a sad story
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Post by .:Brightclaw:. on Mar 15, 2008 13:20:36 GMT -5
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Post by Rowanleaf on Mar 15, 2008 15:34:48 GMT -5
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Post by Starpaw on Mar 16, 2008 12:51:36 GMT -5
there is another poem like that, that i read
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