metalicpaws story

[Metallicpool]

CRANECLAN

leader-cranestar-white fur/blue eyes tom
deputy-windwhistel-shiny gray she-cat/green eyes
medicnecat-sparowfur-golden she-cat/amber eyes
warriors-
pelicanfang-blue-gray tom/blue eyes
apprentice:hummingpaw-brown she-cat with a white underbelly/brown eyes
monarchfang-all brown she-cat/green eyes
checkerpaw-white tom with black stripes/amber eyes
metalicpool-shiny gray tom/amber eyes
apprentice:soon to come
queens-
rubyheart-pale she-cat/blue eyes
rosefur-orange she-cat/amber eyes
elders-
jayfang-blue-gray tom/amber eyes
ravenclaw-orange tortise shell/amber eyes

[Metallicpool]

chapter1
"HELP"yowled checkerpaw.he was caught under a warriors grip.he slashed at the warriors underbelly with his left paw."get off"he meowed.the warrior got off as his mentor monarchfang jumped at it.checkerpaw got up from where he stood.monarchfang knocked the air out of the enemy."what is wrong with you"she meowed running over."i didnt notice i was on a other clans territory."well before more come lets get out of here"so he and his mentor ran toward there camp.
not done yet ill modify later