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Post by Lightningstar on Oct 6, 2007 22:19:04 GMT -5
I have decided to do something that will lead some of us to "try" to work on are posting skills, I am going to give a prize to the best poster of the week.
This means if I have seen you Rp and others have too, and you were good at it so you put in the following...
1.It had powerful things in it/made the thread standout!
2.It had been worked on and edited.
3.Was long.
4.Was colorful (make sure the colors are good and easy to read!)
5. Was in Rp mode..(IC)
So we will vote for this, hopfully it gets others working hard on there posts!Also if Lightningheart did not see you Rp on a thread you will not be in the poll. So if you have posted and you think that it had 1,2,3,4,5 in it them PM me and tell me to check it!Or I will say on your thread that I have seen it!I will only look at ONE post that you have done in this week!
Prizes:
1st: 45 posts-9 karma
2nd: 25 posts-5 karma
3rd: 10 posts-3 karma
Hm: 10 posts-1karma
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Post by Lagoonpool on Oct 10, 2007 17:15:35 GMT -5
here are 2 posts I made, they are not that long though!!
The night was quickly frolicking through the unknown sky. Searching for the rest of her clan, Lagoonpool spotted Lightninghearft talking to Bloodfang. A chill ran through her body icy cold and very unbearable, she could just feel it inside her vains, rushing all over her body like a deathly titlewave. Somrthing was up, something was not right.Trying aS hard as she could to forget what she felt, she gazed around the clearing once more. All four clans were here and the gathering was about to start. It was no use pushing the feeling away, it was there and was never going to leave. Lagoonpool was motionless, glued to the spot as if she had seen Tigerstar with her own eyes. Cats were visiting each other, she had to talk to Froststar, wherever she was. Glancing around the clearing, swarning with cats was Froststar. With all of her strenghth and all of her might, Lagoonpool finally got the courage to walk over and chat with Froststar, not knowing how the night was to end, but whatever it was, surely it was bad news.......
Here is another one!!!
Setting her spare time aside to talk to Snowstorm was quite relieving, but Lagoonpool sensed that Snowstorm was in her own little mind wanting to talk to someone else. " Hello Snowstorm, I'm.....content, I can see your somewhere in a hurry so I won't keep you waiting!" Lagoonpool replied.
Deep down, Lagoonpool had a sinking feeling, almost like sensation. ((It was if she were on the Titanic.)) Her mind was telling her Lightningheart was different, almost like the "bad" she kept on experiencing. Only, her heart told differently, her heart told her the opposite. Medicine Cats use both their heart as much as their common sense. This time was different, Lagoonpool always knew when it was time for either of them, this time there was nothing but confusion. Was Starclan testing her? Maybe she had done something against Starclan's will. Whatever it was she was alone to make up her desision. Today, she could not feel Starclan's pelts rubbing against hers or smell their unique scents drifting around her, no, instead she was alone, as if their was no Starclan......
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Post by Lightningstar on Oct 15, 2007 19:24:18 GMT -5
We now can vote on yours!I am in both of them..lol..weird... Anyway, I love them and they will really put you high in the shelves there if you know what I mean!  |
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Post by Starfall on Oct 15, 2007 19:45:14 GMT -5
Here's some of my best ones!!!!!! Hope you can vote on them!
Snowstorm was heading back to camp wondering what was wrong with her sister Iciclepaw. Why would she want me to leave? I know we are sisters...... She can tell me anything... unless she had done something she is ashamed of? What could it possibly be? Coldfur! Is there something wrong with my sister?
Sorry Snow, I can't help you with that! Her ancestor is different than me. Sure I can relate to your mother and all.... But I can't for some reason relate to Iciclepaw's ancestor...... Which is actually strange considering you two are related....... Maybe she has an ancestor from your father, Braveheart's side.. so maybe you should ask him next time he visits your camp.
Why can't I visit him? I need to know this now!! Iciclepaw was born in the same litter as me! She WAS the closest person that understood me..... now I just feel like I was used and discarded...... My mother is too busy with her Deputy job. My father is in Thunderclan. Phantompaw doesn't like anybody in my camp that she wouldn't even talk to me. And Jaywing is in Riverclan and Sparkpaw has spoken to anyone in a real long time I forget what he looks like!
Just shut up would you?!? I seen that already! I thought you mother would be close to you as my mother was until I went to live with my father... But anyhow you not the only one who life was terrible! Think about it. You mother may have had a horrible life she hasn't told you about! And Jaywing... He lived in another clan without any family members around! See how there life improved though? He moved here in Shadowclan not to long ago... That was good! Phantompaw's life can get better as well.... I just know it! She just can't give up hope! You should tell her that!
Well, Life has gotten better for them...... But you know if I tell Phatompaw that she claw my ears off! Well I will try anyhow! Ok I going to the camp to talk with my mother. See you later Coldfur.
See ya! She meowed. Her voice and appearance disappeared but still lingered in the air as Snowstorm entered Shadowclan camp.
"Lightningheart! Lightningheart! You got a moment?" She meowed from a distance.
Well I hope this one works I will post another one after your judgement on this one ok?
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